Excellent technique, but alas, the sound quality is not the best. Therefore, phrasing and articulation was lost; maybe because the organist didn't take into account the accoustics of the church/hall? I would suggest a more sober tempo for the prelude and a steadier tempo for the fugue.
This would bring more elegance and clarity to the recorded performance.
But, as I said earlier, excellent technique ( I could see the fingering, and pedaling.....).