The One True Faith : What Happened to the Catholic Church?

I just love the fact that you're paying homage to that bit of Prince Caspian
with this tale within a tale (I'm sure it has another fancier name more
appropriate to the craft of writing, but...). I think I can honestly say I
will enjoy it somewhat more than I did the Prince Caspian interlude, because
there I was always anxious to get back to my Pevensies. Here they are part of
the tale, sad and horrible though it may be.

Yikes, here was the train crash that might have been, eh? At first I wasn't
sure if it was supposed to be 'the crash', simply because the other elements
(Peter, meeting the rest besides the Professor, etc.) were missing (Edmund's
limp was there, though. :o). Poor Edmund, he certainly carries a load on his
shoulders and twined about his insides, doesn't he? That nurse was, wow - the
imagery was skillful as always, and the words and descriptions you used
definitely conveyed the sickness that comes along with sweets - or too much of
them, rather, or of the wrong kind. It's good the …